So a friend of mine has this lame webcomic he does on facebook for his friends and he told me I could write a guest comic. Now I made this one and he didn't like is but I'm thinking it's just his lack of comic sense. Just to be sure I'd like to run it past you guys.
So tell me what you think of this okay? No need to sweet talk it, just be honest please :)

I don't get it.

curse my terrible drawing skills! :(

that mouse surely must have been banged all night

^.^

haha very clever

hehe, its not too bad grape ! Liking the idea, should get drawn a bit better though...

Not all that bad, but yeah, better drawing ;) made me laugh a little bit

im going to paste this here, my workstudy does weird random webcomics daily:


http://www.nedsnoggin.com

Nice :)

Btw, Here's the original comic that I was drawing for. Mixes a bit of Dutch 'n English, the guy probably didn't draw it with international viewers in mind but I guess most of the material should be understandable. link